Friday, August 14, 2009

Pinnacle Uprising – Episode I – Planting the Seed

For the past 3 years, this story has been struggling to take shape. Though the seeds were sown way back in 2006 / 2007, I have finally found the courage to write again and with the guidance of my Mentor, Merlin – The Magician / The Court Jester, I believe the truth shall see the light of dawn.

It all began when The Creator was tricked into leading his team, along with several others, under the watchful eye of Merlin to the very summit of success. He had no Idea about the hurdles he would face and the knowledge he would gain on this journey to the peak. That he would rise and fall, that he would be remembered forever and forgotten as well, that he would change forever as a person for this was no ordinary journey.

After a long and arduous ordeal of flying on a low cost Broom Stick, The creator landed at the village of the Western Frontier. He was greeted by the Unicorn and shown his way around the village where he met Blazer – The Entertainer, Palin – The Damsel in Distress and Yoda – Who was “Like No Other”.

Having seen the usual, The Creator settled down for a glass of free, cheap wine. One followed the other and he started to wander around the wilderness with a feather in his cap, a bowl of wine in one hand and the bottle in the other. It was not long before he bumped into the Village Elder – Lord Hilton. Lord Hilton was pretty amused meeting the Creator. He looked nothing like what Merlin had told he was capable of achieving, but none the less, Lord Hilton did not care much for he knew that as long as his commands were followed, the Uprising would be achieved.

Content, the Lord Moved on while The Creator, humbled by the Lords’ presence, continued to seek out the others he had so often heard of and never met. He Met Vidhata – The Creator of everything, The Siren – who could lure anyone with his fatal song and not the Least, Sunshine – The Queen of Dark Arts without whose permission no creation could take life and whole brilliant smile could dazzle you and render you blind.

This was the Situation which The Creator found himself in when he moved to the Western Frontier to carry out the task that was bestowed upon him as his destiny. Unaware of the brewing political storm he had landed himself into, The Creator was determined to make it thru.

NOTE: Please do provide your feedback and suggestions for the development of this story.

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Anonymous Anonymous believes...

Hope you are well and in the best of health. May you be blessed and loved always!
J.

Sat Mar 20, 09:27:00 PM 2010  
Blogger Unknown believes...

hey,
lovely plot and details- i think the tentative characterization of the protagonist and his comrades but i'd want to rear more about their characters, like what brought them there and what binds them together etc...
love it though and can see alot of structure and development from here!!!:)

Mon Jun 21, 12:29:00 PM 2010  
Anonymous Anonymous believes...

Ahhh, what has brought this soon to be literary masterpiece is the urging and COMMANDMENT of the one called Merlin. Trust me, if these characters were to develop any further, they would take on ET like powers in their respective areas of expertise!!!

Mon Jul 26, 12:56:00 PM 2010  

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